It's good--but I do have some suggestions for potential improvement...
Is the area inside the magnifying glass your service area? Or does it go beyond that area as well? If the circle is not a true representation of the travel limits, maybe another means of showing them would be better.
I think the map behind the magnifying glass looks a bit cluttered, and therefore detracts from the rest of the image. Can you either remove all the map data outside the magnifying glass, and just have the outline of the state (still filled in white), plus the map data inside the glass? Or, at least eliminate all those smaller highways and names of smaller cities in the state outside the magnifying glass?
Maybe above your small print of "Our main service area...", put a larger headline of "LARGEST LOCKSMITH SERVICE AREA IN THE REGION!!" or something like that, to really emphasize that point.
This is grammatical nitpicking, but--I recommend changing the wording to:
"Our main service area is 30 - 40 miles around Sumter, but we will travel up to 100 miles if requested."
(The changes I made are that I removed the capitalization on "Main Service Area", added spaces before and after the dash, changed the period to a comma after "Sumter", removed the capitalization on "But", and deleted the words "our services are". I think it just flows better if those words are removed--they're unnecessary to the meaning.)
But like I said, these are nitpicks. All in all, it looks sharp!